With
A Potter man’s hands
And with a Watch repairer’s eyes
I wish to hold and see
With
A Professor’s pen
And with a Doctor’s Needle
I wish to write and pinch
With
A Manual Scavenger’s Head
And with a Banker’s Calculator
I wish to ferry and count
With
A Priest’s Cloak
And with a Chef’s Nose
I wish to cover and sniff
With
A Wanderer’s Legs
And with a Sadhu’s hair
I wish to traverse and knot
Your silhouette, your giggles
Your mass, your fragrance
Your territory, your being!
and your composition,,,wonderfully written… 🙂
Cyno…
Thanks Sarabjeet. Welcome to the blog!!
Very nice
🙂
Greetings!
How we wish to have the best from everyone and become the best of ourselves…Interesting, thought provoking and a ray of positivity. Lovely poem.
nicely said Saru!
That blew me over! You went ahead invoking the choicest imagery, piling up for the breathtaking climax. Your poem is a delight to the closing breath.
Thank you!
अति सुंदर।
SO LOVELY AND INSPIRING A POEM.
As I read this, I could conjure up the images in my mind, which truly proves this poem as a masterpiece!
wonderful poem………
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thanks!
Incredible…loved it so much that i cannot stop from commenting it…!!!
Thanks Anjan…Hope to hear more often from you!!
first time visiting, i liked what I saw, oops read…:)
thanks dear!! please do visit again!
I’m wondering: why didn’t this post appear on my reader. WordPress is becoming very naughty nowadays.
This is too good a poem, most importantly, I must applaud your imagination.
“Watch repairer’s eyes
a Banker’s Calculator
Priest’s Cloak
Sadhu’s hair”
Where did you get all these from? 😉 Such attention to every minute details. Incredible!
yay!!!! amit baba is back! 🙂
loved the poem, your way of exploring… what? the world? your lover? literary world?
ishaaron ko agar samjho raaz ko raaz rehne do!!
😉
Regards!!
jee janab. ishara samajh me to nahi aaya par…
ah, my friend, you’ve been conquered and don’t you know it… 😉 🙂
I sent the wrong link. Sorry http://wp.me/p28tjX-AQ This is the correct one for the influential blog of 2012 Honor.
nice one! i liked what you write about the watch repairer’s eye!
thanks sash!! glad u liked it!!
wow!! incredible poetry… 🙂
thanks a lot odyzz!!
happy new year! wish you a fantabulous year!
thanks ji!! same to u!
Oh this is good!
This is GOOD!
thanks and happy new year!!
hello, PC… have a busy and happy new year! cheerio 🙂
🙂
new post please!
A very strong image accompanied by wonderful words. I wish you all the best for the new year.
thanks Munchow!
What a wonderful poem!! Thanks so much for sharing it!
Thanks a lot!!
kidhar ho amitbaba? kumbh ke mele me?
dilli mein!!
What a wonderful blog you have! A beautifully written post.
Thanks WB!!
🙂
Your thoughts, your words
Simply Awesome!
Thanks a lot!
Where are you?
Here is a Liebster for you: Merci, Mes Amis
A Liebster comin’ up for ya ! http://themoonstone.wordpress.com/2013/02/19/lo-behold-the-liebster/
Beautiful and passionate Amit 🙂
Thanks Madhu!