With
December 19, 2012
With
A Potter man’s hands
And with a Watch repairer’s eyes
I wish to hold and see
With
A Professor’s pen
And with a Doctor’s Needle
I wish to write and pinch
With
A Manual Scavenger’s Head
And with a Banker’s Calculator
I wish to ferry and count
With
A Priest’s Cloak
And with a Chef’s Nose
I wish to cover and sniff
With
A Wanderer’s Legs
And with a Sadhu’s hair
I wish to traverse and knot
Your silhouette, your giggles
Your mass, your fragrance
Your territory, your being!
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and your composition,,,wonderfully written…
Cyno…
Thanks Sarabjeet. Welcome to the blog!!
Very nice
Greetings!
How we wish to have the best from everyone and become the best of ourselves…Interesting, thought provoking and a ray of positivity. Lovely poem.
nicely said Saru!
That blew me over! You went ahead invoking the choicest imagery, piling up for the breathtaking climax. Your poem is a delight to the closing breath.
Thank you!
अति सुंदर।
SO LOVELY AND INSPIRING A POEM.
As I read this, I could conjure up the images in my mind, which truly proves this poem as a masterpiece!
wonderful poem………
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thanks!
Incredible…loved it so much that i cannot stop from commenting it…!!!
Thanks Anjan…Hope to hear more often from you!!
first time visiting, i liked what I saw, oops read…:)
thanks dear!! please do visit again!
I’m wondering: why didn’t this post appear on my reader. WordPress is becoming very naughty nowadays.
This is too good a poem, most importantly, I must applaud your imagination.
“Watch repairer’s eyes
a Banker’s Calculator
Priest’s Cloak
Sadhu’s hair”
Where did you get all these from?
Such attention to every minute details. Incredible!
yay!!!! amit baba is back!
loved the poem, your way of exploring… what? the world? your lover? literary world?
ishaaron ko agar samjho raaz ko raaz rehne do!!
Regards!!
jee janab. ishara samajh me to nahi aaya par…
ah, my friend, you’ve been conquered and don’t you know it…
I sent the wrong link. Sorry http://wp.me/p28tjX-AQ This is the correct one for the influential blog of 2012 Honor.
nice one! i liked what you write about the watch repairer’s eye!
thanks sash!! glad u liked it!!
wow!! incredible poetry…
thanks a lot odyzz!!
happy new year! wish you a fantabulous year!
thanks ji!! same to u!
Oh this is good!
This is GOOD!
thanks and happy new year!!
hello, PC… have a busy and happy new year! cheerio
new post please!
A very strong image accompanied by wonderful words. I wish you all the best for the new year.
thanks Munchow!
What a wonderful poem!! Thanks so much for sharing it!
Thanks a lot!!
kidhar ho amitbaba? kumbh ke mele me?
dilli mein!!
What a wonderful blog you have! A beautifully written post.
Thanks WB!!
Your thoughts, your words
Simply Awesome!
Thanks a lot!
Where are you?
Here is a Liebster for you: Merci, Mes Amis
A Liebster comin’ up for ya ! http://themoonstone.wordpress.com/2013/02/19/lo-behold-the-liebster/
Beautiful and passionate Amit
Thanks Madhu!