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Tit and Tat

June 9, 2012

Oh that sound- 

the glass tumbler fell on the wooden floor

and did not break.

That sight- 

the lizard chased the moth on the wall

and once again failed.

That dream-

I caught the thief red-handed in the room

and could not shout.

That effort-

the car pushed by all men from the colony

and did not start.

That conversation-

it rested on the thin line between a quarrel and a proposal

and ended up as neither.

That silence-

where all was done and nothing said

and never resumed.

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  1. June 9, 2012 7:11 pm

    Very nice indeed! I greatly enjoyed this!

    • June 9, 2012 8:48 pm

      thank you so much Sir!

  2. June 9, 2012 7:32 pm

    How powerful and commanding and exciting dude. Loved this!

    • June 9, 2012 8:47 pm

      thanks a lot Pete!

  3. June 9, 2012 9:07 pm

    That poem-
    Where so few words were used
    And so much was said!
    ===================
    Regards
    GV

    • June 9, 2012 11:27 pm

      :) :) so glad to read your comment Sir!

  4. June 9, 2012 10:57 pm

    Enjoyed the tit and the tat :)

    • June 9, 2012 11:28 pm

      cheers!

  5. chaudharyraju1 permalink
    June 10, 2012 4:41 pm

    Great, Amit!

  6. June 11, 2012 8:00 am

    Like That, that’s followed by that in the Tit & Tat! :) Well written.
    And amidst all that, couldn’t resist putting this from my penny jar.
    That Life ..
    that was once without a wife!
    (Disclaimer: do not claim that, it’s a tat for some tit. Happily Married is a popular term too ;) )

    • June 11, 2012 9:08 am

      hahaha!

      Yatin ji!!

      be careful!!!
      :P

  7. June 11, 2012 3:28 pm

    good one amit

  8. June 11, 2012 10:35 pm

    Terrific post

  9. June 12, 2012 1:33 am

    Interesting – what inspired this, if I may ask? :)

    • June 26, 2012 10:28 am

      the doom that I am in for- may be that!!!

      thanks Puneet for the comment!

      • June 26, 2012 10:42 pm

        Haha, hold on tight then! And I’m always happy to stop by your blog. Until next time.

  10. June 12, 2012 3:55 pm

    Excellent. All of it I could relate with. Felt you wrote this for me :-)

    • June 26, 2012 10:27 am

      So happy to hear that!

  11. June 13, 2012 4:17 pm

    Great poem ! :)

    • June 26, 2012 10:26 am

      :)

  12. June 16, 2012 9:13 am

    so lovely

    • June 26, 2012 10:27 am

      thanks!

  13. June 16, 2012 12:55 pm

    Nice poem!! I love It!

    • June 26, 2012 10:25 am

      thank you!

  14. June 17, 2012 11:28 am

    Great fun reading the ‘Tit and Tat! :)
    Cheers.

    • June 26, 2012 10:24 am

      thanks Dilip!

  15. June 22, 2012 9:36 pm

    I am dead certain that i posted a comment on this post- right on the day it was blogged. must have gone to spambox. thats why you did not answered to it.

    it took a little to grasp the poem but once grasped..

    what are you doing? enjoying monsoon?

    • June 26, 2012 10:24 am

      it wasnt spam boxed….it lay unapproved for some 13 days or so!!!!

      • June 29, 2012 1:40 pm

        so what did you do? got married?

        • June 29, 2012 1:46 pm

          haha! No SB!

          My sister was the candidate for the Mayor elections in the city and I was actively campaigning for her. That kept me busy for some 20 days or so!

          Have been thinking of a post about the experiences in the campaign. Let me see what comes up!
          :)

        • June 29, 2012 1:53 pm

          delhi mayor. did she won? cool!

        • June 29, 2012 1:56 pm

          not Delhi. She was contesting the elections in my hometown in UP. The results will be out on the 7th of July! Hoping for the best!

        • June 29, 2012 2:03 pm

          and that is…
          all the best! :)

        • June 29, 2012 2:04 pm

          thanks dear!

  16. June 24, 2012 4:39 pm

    Namaste,

    Your writing is awesome… You should fill many books with your thoughts on the issues that concern you….

    Thomas

    • June 26, 2012 10:23 am

      thanks Baker…thats very encouraging!

  17. June 26, 2012 9:42 am

    enjoyed reading ur lines, but amit, did the thief shout out after seeing u? :D

    • June 26, 2012 10:22 am

      he he he….:(

  18. June 26, 2012 10:17 am

    yay!!!! amit woke up from hibernation!

    • June 26, 2012 10:20 am

      hey! so sorry SB…was away for a very important engagement and could not access the net..yeah I am back and so glad to see your comments!

      cheers!

  19. sash permalink
    June 27, 2012 3:27 pm

    That reflections-
    Of tits and tats concerned personal
    and are nonetheless universal.

    That Post-
    Many attempted to write their mood (doom)
    and none succeeded like you did.

    Sash

    • June 27, 2012 5:55 pm

      extremely nice of you to say so. wonderful comment dear.thanks!

      • sash permalink
        June 27, 2012 6:04 pm

        I consider it my honour, bro, your visit and like on my blog! I started following. You will see me coming in slowly into your zone. :) I really liked what you wrote. Mark it.

        • June 27, 2012 6:06 pm

          made my day!!

          how do i get to your page??

        • sash permalink
          June 27, 2012 6:08 pm

          hahaha… you did already. :) featured by Nabadip.

          Don’t so bother yourself my brother, I am just here: idoitsblog.wordpress.com

        • June 27, 2012 6:14 pm

          thanks dear…I am subscribed!

        • sash permalink
          June 27, 2012 6:17 pm

          Some frequencies are rare to be tuned into. Your blog is one of those. I got lucky, as Diana said about serendipity – discovering things by an accident.

          Thanks for subscribing. I am honored.

        • June 27, 2012 6:17 pm

          ohho…comeon!

  20. sash permalink
    June 27, 2012 11:44 pm

    Bro, being a fan of your lines already, i request you to think of that sight.

    • June 27, 2012 11:54 pm

      sure bro!

  21. July 1, 2012 11:19 am

    superb poem !

  22. July 5, 2012 10:18 pm

    great going man!!!

  23. July 6, 2012 4:00 am

    I love the contradictions of this poem. What is and what could have been – or maybe not. Great writing.

  24. July 10, 2012 9:05 pm

    That despair
    Conceived in my blues
    Got aborted by hope :-)

    • July 11, 2012 10:31 am

      Beautiful! :)

  25. July 12, 2012 12:51 am

    We hear much in the silence in words never spoken… I enjoyed this P-C… Blessings ~Sue

  26. August 12, 2012 11:40 am

    You do justice to the saying “Brevity is the soul of wit” with the above lines…so little wriiten but so much said…

    • August 12, 2012 11:41 am

      thanku thanku!

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