Tit and Tat
June 9, 2012

Oh that sound-
the glass tumbler fell on the wooden floor
and did not break.
That sight-
the lizard chased the moth on the wall
and once again failed.
That dream-
I caught the thief red-handed in the room
and could not shout.
That effort-
the car pushed by all men from the colony
and did not start.
That conversation-
it rested on the thin line between a quarrel and a proposal
and ended up as neither.
That silence-
where all was done and nothing said
and never resumed.
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Very nice indeed! I greatly enjoyed this!
thank you so much Sir!
How powerful and commanding and exciting dude. Loved this!
thanks a lot Pete!
That poem-
Where so few words were used
And so much was said!
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Regards
GV
Enjoyed the tit and the tat
cheers!
Great, Amit!
Like That, that’s followed by that in the Tit & Tat!
Well written.
)
And amidst all that, couldn’t resist putting this from my penny jar.
That Life ..
that was once without a wife!
(Disclaimer: do not claim that, it’s a tat for some tit. Happily Married is a popular term too
hahaha!
Yatin ji!!
be careful!!!
good one amit
Terrific post
Interesting – what inspired this, if I may ask?
the doom that I am in for- may be that!!!
thanks Puneet for the comment!
Haha, hold on tight then! And I’m always happy to stop by your blog. Until next time.
Excellent. All of it I could relate with. Felt you wrote this for me
So happy to hear that!
Great poem !
so lovely
thanks!
Nice poem!! I love It!
thank you!
Great fun reading the ‘Tit and Tat!
Cheers.
thanks Dilip!
I am dead certain that i posted a comment on this post- right on the day it was blogged. must have gone to spambox. thats why you did not answered to it.
it took a little to grasp the poem but once grasped..
what are you doing? enjoying monsoon?
it wasnt spam boxed….it lay unapproved for some 13 days or so!!!!
so what did you do? got married?
haha! No SB!
My sister was the candidate for the Mayor elections in the city and I was actively campaigning for her. That kept me busy for some 20 days or so!
Have been thinking of a post about the experiences in the campaign. Let me see what comes up!
delhi mayor. did she won? cool!
not Delhi. She was contesting the elections in my hometown in UP. The results will be out on the 7th of July! Hoping for the best!
and that is…
all the best!
thanks dear!
Namaste,
Your writing is awesome… You should fill many books with your thoughts on the issues that concern you….
Thomas
thanks Baker…thats very encouraging!
enjoyed reading ur lines, but amit, did the thief shout out after seeing u?
he he he….:(
yay!!!! amit woke up from hibernation!
hey! so sorry SB…was away for a very important engagement and could not access the net..yeah I am back and so glad to see your comments!
cheers!
That reflections-
Of tits and tats concerned personal
and are nonetheless universal.
That Post-
Many attempted to write their mood (doom)
and none succeeded like you did.
Sash
extremely nice of you to say so. wonderful comment dear.thanks!
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I really liked what you wrote. Mark it.
made my day!!
how do i get to your page??
hahaha… you did already.
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Don’t so bother yourself my brother, I am just here: idoitsblog.wordpress.com
thanks dear…I am subscribed!
Some frequencies are rare to be tuned into. Your blog is one of those. I got lucky, as Diana said about serendipity – discovering things by an accident.
Thanks for subscribing. I am honored.
ohho…comeon!
Bro, being a fan of your lines already, i request you to think of that sight.
sure bro!
superb poem !
great going man!!!
I love the contradictions of this poem. What is and what could have been – or maybe not. Great writing.
That despair
Conceived in my blues
Got aborted by hope
Beautiful!
We hear much in the silence in words never spoken… I enjoyed this P-C… Blessings ~Sue
You do justice to the saying “Brevity is the soul of wit” with the above lines…so little wriiten but so much said…
thanku thanku!